Feedback on GFX - returning after long time gone

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#1

Hey all I’ve been gone for a Long time in GFX and I just made this in around half an hour.

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What do you think. How Should I Improve it. And if you like it, Why?

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#2

That is really nice
Your legs seem to blend in with the background
I love how your shirt gets lighter as it goes up, if that makes sense

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#3

I like the effects and the background, but I think the character should have a pose, instead of just standing still

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#4

So the pose is stiff so it looks dull try bend arms and legs. There is an outline but ONLY for the head which is strange

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#5

The pants are basically invisible because it blends in with the background

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#6

Thank you, it probably wouldn’t be to hard to add an outline.

#7

Thanks although I didn’t create the shirt I edited the UV’s of the mesh as to remove the draw strings that are there on my actual avatar.

#8

text is cool but colours could be gradient, the mask sorta pokes out a lot and pose but i alrdy said that

#9

Do you think it looks better with the gradient?

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#10

Yeh also duplicate text. Move it down and left then make it greyish so it looks 3D