I think this raw render of this GFX looks good for one of your first few.
Some feedback I have is to add a little more lighting (especially towards the hat/face of the character). I’m not sure what effect you’re trying to add (like he’s looking at a TV or screen), but I personally think there could be a little more lighting.
This has a nice and chill vibe that I really like. Keep up the good work!
The effect I was going for is just a blue/white light shining up his face. I wanted it to be some type of detective scene where the guy is puzzled and he is trying to figure out what has happened. About the lighting, I guess I could have made the light shine all over the area. Thanks for the feedback.