A piece I had just made, I was wondering if I could get your guys’ feedback!
(The aspects such as the character floating and the background being blurred are intentional.)
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that face looks awful
that bottomtext looks awful
that animal looks awful
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I’m not trying to be harsh here but can you maybe fix your character which is levitating on the sand?
i used a snipping tool which was built-in my computer so dont mind the white lines.
Also I’m not sure if you made this on purpose but can you fix the blur that is in the background?
Overall. the GFX is pretty decent, but I’ve encountered some problems with it, 7/10
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It looks okay to me, but I think the background is a bit too realistic for the roblox character in the foreground. The character also looks a bit empty. I also don’t understand the bright and yellow light in the background (right).
The animation besides that looks alright and pretty smooth (excepts that its levitating).
Also, - if this is a meme template - what meme would you use that for?
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What about giving constructive feedback, instead of just thinking that you are better and cooler, just because you can comment this creation as bad, so you can feel powerful? I bet you can’t even do better yourself…
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how can it better?
and i am just honnest
i cant make image with roblox characters that are not photos
The levitating is intentional and the blurs are too, thanks for the feedback though!
i don’t think you get it… the character, the text it’s meant to be satire it’s not meant to look good LOL.
The levitating is intentional and it’s not really for a meme format. This is more for practice above all things. The yellow light is also meant to be bloom, i could probably make that softer though, the light seems too intense.
thanks for the feedback!
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the blur is too heavy, its so clear that its a background, the posing needs to be better, why is he floating, and also why is my guy a literal giant? those waves are like puddles for him! the lighting is pretty ok in terms of matching the background, but you can see the topside of his leg:
oh also weird torso and leg connector.
the font doesn’t fit in and the black lines around the text doesn’t either. i dont like his character design and slightly abnormally shaped torso, and his face has one blue eye and one normal?
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the background was very low res, the best thing i could do was either get a new image or blur it, the levitation is intentional, the character is really just satire (and so is the text). The rest I can take on my own lack of skill.
Thanks for the Feedback.
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Nice GFX! I love the pose and fact, overall not that bad.
I would say that the right side is way too bright, I have no idea where the light is coming from and it’s almost blinding.
Haha, it’s funny. I like the lighting and the rim lighting is good. I think there’s some clipping on the leg and the pose in general just looks awkward.
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Fair argument and I agree, but in his defense you don’t have to be the best at something to criticize it. Anyone can criticize art in their own form, art in general is a very subjective thing already. Being “good/bad” at art /=/ you can/can’t criticize it.