Feedback on GFX

Hello everyone.
I just started learning about making GFXs. So here is my first render with graphics. It took me a few hours, and it is heavily inspired by Valorant. Feedback/criticism is appreciated.

Update #1:

Version 1:

Version 2 (text with shadows):

I prefer Version #1 over Version #2.

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It is kinda to bright for his face low that down.

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You should hide the leg and make the light less bright.

Overall still looking pretty good.

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Very bright however awesome work!

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Make use of gradients, also your render is too bright.

Don’t bulk everything together, make sure you separate each layer by some visual change. Ex: Merge the text with the background, have some effects going on so it’s not too plain.

Tho, good luck with your graphics journey, you will learn many things along the way.

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Thank you @nanosph , @vipkute0057 , @securedmind , and @3Debug for the feedback.
I decided to redo some stuff, and I think it looks better. (Added the pictures above)
Thank you again.

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Lovely work! keep up the great work

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This is some really nice work! and is really good for your first render with graphics

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