Hi, i just made this out of fun. Rate this from 0-10. If u have criticism please tell. Thank you
0.5
Uhm, it’s not exactly a GFX
It’s quite bad…
If this was your first work it’s at least visible, so good job
thanks. how can i improve it?
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Starting with something important, make your character 3D, add a realistic background with lighting, make better effects
for the background: I didnt make the background yet so it is transparent. Next: this isnt meant to be realistic. For the third : Thank you for that advice!
first try to find the theme for your render/gfx will be, like for example will it be an “Aesthetic” theme, “military” theme, “supernatural” theme, etc.
second try to make some simple background to make your render/gfx more interesting you can try by trying to add a few blocks and try to sculpt simple furniture for example a “chair” or maybe you can download some of the models from Roblox studio for your first reference or just to experiment around
also what software did you use to make this render/gfx ?? o.o
3 out of 10. Okay for a beginner, but lots of room for improvement.
Let’s start with the positives. You seem to know how to overlay images and somewhat use bloom effects, which is good. The glowing parts add a lot of flavor.
However, the lightning image looks like one you can find on the internet, and they are not moved around and scaled properly (ex: it looks squished near the eyes and left hand). The render is way too dark, ADD BLENDER LIGHTING. Use the rig I attached below to make your renders much smoother and higher quality. The pose is a bit weird, and it’s most likely because you didn’t use an R15 GFX rig. Lastly, change the background! If you wanted to make this render with no intended background, then good job, but if not, you can change the color and add other props in the back, up to you.
Overall, it’s okay, but you can still fix a lot of things here. Cheers.
PaintRigV3.blend - Google Drive (R15 rig)
All GFX is realistic.
It doesn’t matter if it’s military or magical, the lighting and 3D modeling have to be well made.
There are people who add effects like blur after but your work was purely caused by lack of details
Thanks, i use blender. Also i didn’t add a background since it will be used in a game.
Thanks fo the feedback! Yes i found it on google. And yes it is squished. Also i made it dark because i needed the light to be glowy. Since i can’t use the rig to dummies. So i used blender animation importer plugin. And for the color, It seems best with this color scheme. I went for a “dark supervillain” type of look.
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I m still confused about what are you trying to achieve with the glowing sphere there… is that supposed to be a fireball ?? or is that suppose to be plasma ball ?? o.o
it is a plasma ball. Like a ki blast
ah, I see… but isn’t plasma are suppose to be a bit transparent ?? o.o
not really, if u r in a pitch black room and you turn on a yellow light, it wont be transparent
ah… I see… if that is the case then kk >w<