Feedback on gfx

Hello developers!

This is a gfx I randomly made, I am planning on using it for a commission page. Please tell me anything that could be added or would be needed, thanks! The image is below.

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It’s ok, good for your first. The computer looks really low quality, and the posing here on the leg looks off.

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I do really like how you added bumps in the sheets. Overall it’s pretty good. A few more and you might be ready for commissions!

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Thanks! I am excited to make more gfx’s and I hope to learn more as I go!

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Did you make this in blender? Or studio?

I made the gfx in Roblox studio.

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Nearly the same name! Haha
Unless the text in the top right is a watermark, the text does not really pop like I feel it should be on a commission page

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Same, it feels like something you’d have on an office memo. I’d give it a spin that seems more extraordinary I guess :smiley:

Overall good job Zander :heart:

It’s good, however, I recommend moving to a more powerful software like blender for gfx.

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