Feedback on GFX?

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#1

Hello, I’ve started making some renders for an upcoming game I’m working on and I’m currently trying to make some GFXs to use in the game and for its thumbnails etc…

So far this is the first thumbnail I have done of a player jumping onto a log floating in a river to collect a coin:

Blox Sprint Grasslands Render - v2
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It’s not fully rendered - I screenshotted it before it finished

I think it looks okay… but I also know it could be better.

I don’t have much experience with GFX and this is probably the most complex I’ve ever done but any feedback would be appreciated!

Thanks for reading!
Have a good day :slight_smile:

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#2

This is pretty good for just starting out in GFX, can’t wait to see the fully rendered one :smiley:

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#3

I think maybe you should make a night time so the glowing effect of the coin will look better.

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#4

This GFX looks very good and cool! Nice job on it! How long did it take for you to make this GFX? Did you make it in Blender? I think some of the parts could be darker so the lighting looks more realistic.

#5

I think that the grass on the ground is too repeated.

You should randomize it more. If you’re going for a cartoonish style, you probably shouldn’t use realistic lighting either.

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