Hey there. I’m Drinkinix. I’ve started to learn how to do some GFX on ROBLOX. I would like to see what you all think about a new thing that I have made. (I made this for my magic-themed game.)
Descriptive Feedback would be appreciated!
– Drinkinix 
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Hey so I feel as if this was rushed that might not be the case but in the following I’m gonna suggest some things. Hope this helped from John.
Fix
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The snow/smoke effect doesn’t really look realistic and looks I can’t really tell what it is. It’s snow get a picture/overlay from google for snow falling then shape it to the players.
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The guy looks very stiff I’d bend the joints on blender using Subdivide I find Foods has a good YT vid on how to make a GFX. I just use the bend portion. Link in the section below.
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Rendering the rendering doesn’t look that great just gonna be blunt. I’d use realistic lighting there is a good YT tutorial in the section below.
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Background I get It’s blurred but I think it would be better if you blurred a landscape that fits the theme. If you need it to be done you can send me a message of the background you want and I can blur it.
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Signature sticks out too much I’d make it transparent and smaller.
Links
Foods Tutorial:
Render Tutorial:
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Thanks man. I can really improve from this!
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Also your body is a tool if you’re not sure if it looks natural do the pose in real life then go from there. Hope all of this helped from John! 