Hi, I’ve been making GFXs for the past month. I use Cinema 4D and Photoshop 2015. I would really like to have some criticism on it.
Thank you !
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I honestly love them, a lot. You did a really good job. (❁´◡`❁)
But since you’re looking for feedback:
- The grass is… rounded at the ends? Grass isn’t usually like that in real life.
- In the first GFX, in the upper right corner you can see some strange dots:
Consider removing those? - For the second GFX, I honestly can’t think of anything to improve. Maybe add eyes? But that’s probably an aesthetic choice.
- For your last GFX, this guy’s head is barely visible:
I’m not sure if that’s intentional though.
Anyways I love your GFX. Have a nice day and stay safe. (ෆ˙ᵕ˙ෆ)♡
I think the dots were a problem with the physical sky. Thanks for the feedback!
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Overall you did great. I’m just gonna say some personal opinions and small details that probably aren’t that big of a deal. In the first photo you could add eyes. As @Macawmangrovve12 said the grass is rounded. I would give her normal skin color (Unless that was the point). For the second photo the wall is a big plain and the survive is a bit too small for my liking. Maybe making the Survive bigger would help the wall look less plain. The girl’s shirt and hands are dark so it’s hard to see the gun she is holding. You could add a face as well. For the last photo the guy in the middle with the red Roblox shirt doesn’t have a shadow. Its the same with a couple other people in the back as well. The shadows are going different ways as well which I don’t know if you meant to do that or not. Unless you’re meaning for it to be like that I would try and fix it. The wall again looks plain so maybe add some texture.
I’m being hard on you though. Its really good and I’m just looking for things to give you feedback on. Good job!
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Great job on all of your creations!
First GFX - I like that u added art elements to the character’s pose. For some reason though, the background just doesn’t work for me. Perhaps try a smoky grey background and add a blue aura to the character?
Second GFX - I like this one the most. The color theme you picked is great, and the background fits perfectly. Unless you do want to keep the character’s faces blank, I’d suggest adding some expression since they’re supposedly fighting off zombies and trying to survive.
Third GFX - Great job on all of the character positions! The screen behind them though: over to the left, you can see that the screen is not fully covering up the back. I’d suggest doing that.
Overall, great job though! Hope my feedback gave you some ideas or help you out in some way! 
I think the screen not covering the back was meant to be there. I’m not sure though.
Mhm. It was intentionally implied to be there.
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