So only a couple days ago I tried GFX, I decided to make a lightsaber as I could practice my effects on photoshop and rendering. All feedback appreciated 
What do you think for my first effect GFX?
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Looks really nice! Maybe add a background, or more action in the background? Anyways looks great.
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Wow! Looks cool! As @txeehee said, maybe a background would be nice. It does look very cool anyway!
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Nice job! The first thing I noticed about your GFX (besides that lit watermark 
) was the character’s pose. Overall, I think the pose is excellent in relation to how the sabers are positioned. One thing though - maybe rotate the head towards the front just a little bit. I feel like the head is turned back a tad too much. It’s your choice though.
Another thing I liked were the artistic effects/particles you added to the sabers, of course. Amazing! It kind of matches with that red border.
I think a background would make the GFX look even better, like @txeehee mentioned. Maybe some dark, gloomy place or something like that. It would definitely make those saber effects stand out.
Other than that, great job on your first effect GFX. Keep making them!
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Very nice gfx, may i ask how you added those effects
Great GFX, the sabers look really cool! What I could suggest is soften the shading on the arms, because the legs and head have a soft shading effect, but the arms have shading which is sort of ‘static’.
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I love the signature! I think the GFX is overall perfect. I see nothing out of the ordinary or needing a fixed posture. Amazing work!
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Looks good man! Nice affects. Maybe add a red glow affect coming from the lightsabers
Its nice but theres some shading artifacts
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Wow 
very nice GFX
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Thank you, the feedback really means a lot!
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Oh yes, thank you for pointing that out! I will try and fix stuff like that in my next graphics.
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I used external applications, so I rendered it and took it in photoshop touched it up added effects and such.
Thank you! It means a lot when I have just started
For me it’s just too dark I know its supposed to be. Also you should try R6
R15 generally turns out better in renders.
Really cool! The lightsabre effect is super amazing! For a touch, you can add a star wars background and change your character to a star wars one, jar-jar would be funny XD
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Lol, jar jar binks. Thank you for the feedback!
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I recently started making gfx this will help me out a lot thanks!!!
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Thank you! I will try to add some more red light around.