Feedback On Gfx

Hello Everyone! I’ve Been Working On This For The Past Day And Would Like Some Criticism On It. This Is A Gfx Of @CJ_Angel, Thanks For The Nice Avatar.

Some Info On The Gfx:

*Render Time: 1 Hour 30 Minutes
*Editing Software: Paint.net (Might Be Changing Soon)
*HDRI: Spruit Sunrise HDRI • Poly Haven


Edited Version

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Now That I See It Closer Up The Effects On The Edited One Is Not Transparent Enough :L

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I think it looks good. I do not have anything to suggest. Have a nice day.

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It is a decent GFX, however, I should point out a few things:

The rays in the second one just don’t look right. Looks more like sand blown from what I assume to be the beach. Also, try to make the transparency of the rays lower.

The right arm is out of place and just looks detached from the body.

The last thing I should definitely point out is to make. your watermark. noticeable.
With this picture, if anyone wanted to, they could just simply blend it with the background and claim it’s theirs. Make it black or any colour that makes it stand out.

Hope that helps. It’s a really cool picture. Keep it up :+1:

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I like the GFX! Just an idea, you could put your watermark on the book instead, to make it seem like it’s a book by said company, instead of it just being in the corner.

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As a GFX artist, if this your first one, looks nice.

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That Is An Amazing Idea Thanks!

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Thank You For The Feedback. I Will Definitely Take Most Of This Into Account. I Also Didnt Even See The Arm Dis attached So Thanks For Letting Me Know!

I LOVE IT! Thank you so much!!

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The adidas is very very very pixelated fix it then it will be :ok_hand::ok_hand::ok_hand:

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