Feedback On Group Logo

I made this group logo in about under an hour it was really a training bit as i have only done about 6 gfx before feedback is very appreciated i dont mind criticism.

Group Logo Test.pdn (135.5 KB)
Sorry you have to download i forgot screenshot and closed everything and need to go to sleep soon i may put screenshots up tomorrow (probably not :smiley:)

If anyone needs it, this is a screenshot of the logo:
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Lol I’m not german but google translate is telling me
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The logo itself makes sense.
I like how it’s pretty simplistic, however it looks a bit low quality. Maybe try changing the font of the text - a good website to find fonts is DaFont. The photos themselves seem like free models that were screenshotted in studio and cut out.
I’d smooth out the edges so you can’t see the pixel outline, and probably find different photos, maybe online instead. But that’s just me, you can follow whatever your heart desires.

I hope my feedback helps, good luck!

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Thanks for the feedback i did use free models as i wanted to see what it would look like at first with some things…

Again Thanks for the feedback…

it isn’t bad for a start! other than improving the quality and changing the font, I think the placement of the models can be improved. All of the models don’t mix in together too well, probably because they were all put into the picture separately. Easy way to fix it is just to place them all together in studio and then use that for the logo.

Another thing is the background, you could try using more interesting colors. A gradient for example if possible and if not, you could just trying try increase the contrast between the background and the models. Make it more blue or something, you just gotta play around with it.

Sorry if that didn’t make too much sense, let me know if there’s anything I can explain better :smiley:

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Thanks i was working on the gradient and contrast but i gave up as i got bored and needed to sleep.

Thanks for the feedback

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It would be better if you add more stuffs and shadow effect, just like what i did


Also, using papyrus font is not a bad choice, but I would not recommend using it

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