What could I do to improve
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I would suggest using a better font, #1 and #2 is actually difficult to tell if It’s a “FP” or not.
I’m also personally not a fan of the glow.
Other then that, It’s not too bad, It’s just rather generic - a lot of clothing groups use a similar style to that.
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I could not read the font in the 1st and 2nd pictures, you should definitely use a distinctive type of font. 
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