Feedback on GUI for my glider obby?

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#1

I’ve been working on a glider obby, and this in W.I.P gui. [ the inventory is no-where near done]

I feel like its too clustered and messy, feedback? :upside_down_face:

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#2

Checkpoints should glide in from the top instead of the bottom of the screen.

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#3

yeah, i’ve just did that and it feels much cleaner, thank you for the suggestion!

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#4

An obby without 2 million gamepasses on the screen at once? Good job!

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#5

lol, cheers! ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎

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#6

Well, I’m not a fan of the buttons (The Shop, Stats and) Teleport). The images are touching the outline of the frame, which makes it look weird and you could increase the corners and make them more visible.

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#7

i prefer the icons to be close to the button and big, but i increased there sizes and added a slight corner and it helped quite a bit, cheers!

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#8

I’d recommend using a more cartoony font, and since it’s in that style, you should also adjust the colours.

The checkpoints button is blue, so the background of the top UI should match that blue.

The shop icon is red, so the shop background should be red as well, perhaps with lighter elements in the foreground to highlight the rest?

I think you get the idea. Other than that, great work and good luck!

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#9

This GUI for your glider obby game looks great! Good job on it! How long did it take to make? It’s cool!

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#10

took about 20 minutes to make lol

#11

thanks for the suggestion! i have made the checkpoint gui much more blue, although im planning on remaking the shop gui so i will add a tone of red to it

#12

The GUI looks good for its simplicity and how it looks like a type of UI style called “glassmorphism”

I believe that you just need to make some small changes such as replacing the colors of the UIStrokes based on the “HUD” buttons (Shop, Badges, and Checkpoint). For instance, instead of being purely black, it would be following a slight dark red so it fits better:

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Furthermore, the products inside of SHOP are not centered in the ScrollFrame… It is slightly pointing to the left side. Although it is small and almost unnoticeable, it needs to be consistent with a proper alignment

That’s it for now. Overall, a good GUI without any mess and much information on the screen! Good job!

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#13

never seen someone who has knew so much about gui, i have made changes to the actual frame, and scaled the offer frames properly, cheers! :upside_down_face:

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