Hey I just wanted some feedback on how I could improve these models/somebody to point out flaws I may have missed with them. The models are based off a concept art of futuristic style nerf guns.
15 Likes
These look really good, the only thing I’d suggest is some textures.
Looks good! I would suggets adding holes in the barrels. And colors needed.
Though they do look good, I can see flaws in your designs.
I’m a pretty large gun nerd, so I’ll try to critique your designs from what I know at least.
The first gun seems to be more of a handgun style, but chambered in such a rifle cartridge (or a nerf projectile), so I can see why it has a front-end magazine. But I don’t find it practical how you would shoot the thing. The gun would be front heavy because all of it’s internal parts would be located in the front. The grip is very short, and has an odd angle to it. No sights, not even a bead sight like a shotgun, so I’m not sure how you would be accurate with this. Plus, that is a huge bore. Looks like a 20mm would fit in their, it’s larger than a normal nerf projectile.
If I were you, I would add a stock (or pistol brace) and convert it into a tiny SMG.
The second gun seems to be a rifle configuration of the previous handgun, they have almost identical grips and magazine designs, and the lower receiver looks around the same as well. A much smaller bore, but looks as if its either .50 caliber or .45 caliber. The stock seems a bit short unless its adjustable, and the gun itself looks very front heavy. No sights as well.
Seems a bit impractical for a gun like this, but design wise, I will say it looks cool.
The third gun seems to be another configuration of the first gun, but a sniper like design.
It seems to have a giant bore like the first gun, so I would assume it is just more of an SBR conversion.
The forth gun is downright a sniper configuration of the first gun. I am a bit confused about the barrel length. On the second gun, it seems to be more of a rifle, used for clearing rooms or shooting close to mid range. A sniper rifle is designed to shoot long distances, which is why they have such long barrels. This barrel seems to be at least 11 inches, which is far too impractical for long distance. The stock is very thin, and looks like it can snap if you bang it on the floor.
Overall, I think they all look cool, but as a gun nerd such as me, I find it impractical for actual use.
thanks, ill take it into account. 
1 Like
They all really look fantastic. You’ve done a great job stylistically, and the artistic side of it is really the important part. Not so much if it conforms to stereotypical design in the real world.
I’d love to see these textured!
These are amazing IMO, but I one question.
why are they all nerf guns 
lol srry epic models.
1 Like