Hi! So I made a homestore exterior for a commission, in need of feedback, as I’m having trouble in making some idea’s to make it much better. Interior is still in the works unfortunately.
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The path should be more fancy to match the theme of the homestore. There’s also too much detail on the walls. Try removing some of the stuff that you could live without.
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Actually the one that commissioned me wanted it to be like a homestore in the middle of forest kind of thing which is why I chose the rocks path, I’m still gonna add some stuff like vines, and overgrown grass as soon as possible, as for the walls, I’ll try to lessen the detail on the walls.
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Oh, okay. I’m assuming you will, but add some trees, especially tall ones.
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Actually there is, it’s just not included near the homestore because I stopped adding them mid way and started with the exterior instead. Here’s a pic.
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Nice, one thing I would say is the tents look a little basic, maybe make them more detailed instead of just using the sand texture on a triangle!
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Now that I think about it, it does look basic. I’ll try to search up some textures. 
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I love where you’re going with this. It’s amazing!! =)
However, the big circle on the left is a bit weird and out of place. And second, the entrance door at in the middle of the building is too small. It should be at least twice it’s current width.
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