Feedback on Hotel Build

I am working on a Hotel building (just started), and I don’t know what to add, and where to add a roof, furniture etc. All feedback on how I could improve the little building you’ve already seen and what should I add. Please note: this is my first time building a hotel, so any feedback would help me a lot.

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Hotel | Feedback - Roblox

I’m going to be updating this daily, it’s only about 7% done. I’m just unsure if I should keep it or completely restart it.

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Hi there! I have noticed a few things I would like to see changed.

  1. Make the bar higher up.
  2. Add stools to the bar area.
  3. Add some decorations to spruce up the area. I.E. Bushes, Small trees, Plants. Inside and outside of the hotel.
  4. Add some seating areas. Hotels will usually have a few couches, chairs, and coffee tables.

Add/change those and I feel you are on track for a nice looking hotel!

Thank you for the feedback! What do you mean by

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I mean, bars are usually tall enough to have seating. The bar you have made is too short for anyone to put a chair and sit comfortably.

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This looks pretty cool to me! :+1:

Hard to see how it is going to turn out in the future! I will be happy to see progress!

For now, great job!

Good Feelings,
nygiants819

Looks quite empty, maybe add a staff area, a fireplace, elevators/a staircase, update boards, possibly some type of stand where when someone touches it, they automatically see a GUI with the gamepasses (yes, you’ll probably need help from an experienced scripter for this), a place for uniforms (if the group/hotel in general is going to make some) etc. Overall, it looks amazing!

Thank you for the feedback! I will be posting screenshots in the future to make sure I’m headed to the right path.

Thank you for your critique, personally I can’t script however I might consider adding a few scripts here and there. As for the decoration, I haven’t added yet because I’m still struggling with the size of the lobby, thank you for giving me some suggestions on what I could add!

Boo! :ghost:
For your first time building a hotel, this is amazing. Since it isn’t fully completed, it was hard to find something to give some feedback on.


You have these random parts in your windows. Since they are not on all of the windows, it seems kind of awkward.
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Your proportions are way off. The bar and these seats are way too low to the ground for the character.
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Make a smoother transition point here.

This window isn’t really needed here or on the other side, unless if you are trying to close the players in.
I would watch the color schemes and the open spots. There should be some pillars here and there for ‘support’. I would suggest looking on Google for hotel lobbies.
Great job so far and good luck!
Sincerely,
FallinqSnowFlake :upside_down_face:

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Thank you for the feedback! Proportions, measurements etc. are actually my weak spot, I suppose I’ll have to work on it more. As for transitions, I’ll work on fixing them and making them more smooth, or making it impossible for a player to go there when it isn’t fully fixable.

What do you think I should replace the window to?

Many hotels have cafes and seating areas in their lobby. Your lobby seems a bit wider and not long. You are squished when walking up to the lines, but when you walk left/right, there is a lot of wasted space. You could turn one of those rooms into a yoga room / pool or whatever.
Anything is up to you and your creative brain.
Sincerely,
FallinqSnowFlake :upside_down_face:

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It’s a great start, however it’s quite a bit earlier to ask for feedback since it’s half done, but I think a lot of what has already been said will help you. I do have some suggestion though:

I’ll try using certain materials/colors in your build. At the moment it looks alright, however you should try finishing the design up so we can give feedback on building instead of giving suggestions since you got that planned already.

Most hotels I’ve seen have warm lighting and use a warmer color palette (try searching a picture on google to get some ideas to add to the interior). I also suggest looking at images of a real hotel that looks good to you. Then, you can try adding a bit of detail here and there one you get started making the rooms overall since the building is not yet finished there isn’t much that could be said.

Anyways, It’s looking nice.

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It looks pretty neat. I’d incoperate more designs and logos, and use various colors in-order to brighten the hotel’s overall mood.

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I visited your place and unfortunately I noticed a number of cframe issues littered throughout your place. These minor problems all add up and detract from your build:

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Your bar appears to have a number of the aforementioned cframe errors. It all comes down to size and positioning and you will need to experiment further in order to get it right and eliminate some of these errors.

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This table seems to be floating in mid-air.

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There are further cframe errors in both this large and the smaller pieces of furniture however this corner section comes across as being pretty messy. I think it woul dbe better for you to fill everything here in and just to add beveled bricks that look like cushions.

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The belts on the barriers are not centered and there appears to be at a hole of the bottom of the stand.

The general look of the exterior is quite promising however I noticed a number of cframe clashes where paths meet, similarly the corners of boxes which surround the grass have got cframe clases and appear misaligned.

In the future you might want to keep an eye out for these kind of things. Hope this helps.

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Looks SO good for just starting out! I saw you said your weak point is proportions… my advice would be to use NPCs which are essentially just Roblox characters. You can move them around and line stuff up with them to see how big or small something would be. They definitely help me out A LOT.

Well done! This is pretty good considering it is your first build. I would advise you to use more vibrant and more standing out colors and materials, maybe use some custom textures in your future builds! They help me a lot and I can give you maybe one or two if you want! If so, DM me on Discord. ObjectsThatTwist#8365

Hi there! Congratulations on the first hotel build. One thing that I would personally adjust is the transparency of the windows. You could do with making them .8 or .7 transparency instead of fully transparent. This would likely give it more of a realistic window feel. You did a great job with the windows on the small building to the side of the hotel. I would try to emulate something like that. Otherwise, just keep slowly filling in the lobby and it is going to come together in no time! I also want to commend you on your use of textures. They are quite nice for a first hotel project. Good luck with the rest of the build!