Feedback on Hotel Map

I made this hotel map for my new game coming out called Get Home. I’d be grateful if you could check it out and let me know what you think of it.

I look at everything as a chance to improve, so don’t be afraid to rate it low if you’re being honest. I’d appreciate it if you let me know what I should change and why. Thanks! :smile:

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Oh? I thought it’s supposed to be Building Support since it’s for the hotel build I made.

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kinda cool

need more detail and colour, maybe make it smaller? some parts are really big and with only 2 boxes

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Thank you for your feedback. :slightly_smiling_face:

Make what smaller exactly, the entire building? And what do you mean by “some parts are really big and with only 2 boxes”

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zones, like the pool was really empty, you could add things like glass in the roof, smooth plastic details of colours (white + other) look at the maps of some games (Murder Mistery 2 - Hotel map) is not BIG but everything is detailed and easy to remember

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Oh, okay. I’ll try to add more detail into the rooms and try to resize things. :slightly_smiling_face:

Thank you for the feedback! :+1:

Just a note “x/10 rating is against the rules i would try removing that from your thread since your asking for constructive feedback”

Since it’s more of a map for your project the hotel looks quite plain and lacks colors you may want to experiment into adding lighting features, so the hotel doesn’t appear abandoned and forgotten. The material choices are quite fine, but include rooms so players have to explore more areas I’ll try throwing animations inside the building or at least something that fits the hotel theme.

At the start it’s more of a map but it lacks variety of things hotels in the real world features a warm lighting and use a decent color pallet gives it that home comfort feel.

From the start it looks good perhaps add arrows or a piece of paper players will have to use instead of looking for chalkboards on the walls. It’s good though hope to see the final project! :upside_down_face:

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I like the map! It looks really cool and fun to explore, great job!

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No you made it so it is a creations and that is the channel you put it in.

I like it, but its sorta annoying because the stairs aren’t centered.


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Oh, oops! Thank you for letting me know. This is my first post so I’m still a little shaky on the rules. I’ll be sure to re-read them when I’m about to post again.

I’ll look into adding better lighting and more detail into the building. I think the hotel is pretty big already so I’ll replace the areas that aren’t needed with bedrooms. I was thinking the locker room and meeting room.

The theme of my game is horror, so I tried to make the hotel old and less modern. Should I still try to give it that home comfort feeling?

I’m glad you liked it! :smile:

I see on the right side of the stairs, its a little more to the middle than the left. I’ll fix that, thank you for letting me know.

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Yeah, its just off centered and its kinda weird. Besides that great Hotel!

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It depends since you added a bit of information on what the theme of your hotel holds try to not give it that home feeling since it’s something different then most hotels. Throw a horror look into it try making areas dark with lighting flittering things like that, not much needs to be put into it because you don’t want to overdo the details.

Your build should place a role regarding it’s a old forgotten place what I’m assuming, perhaps add bits of foliage to have that old feel depending on how long the hotel been there is it still being taking care of around human activity? Since a lot isn’t going on you should add some rooms so it’ll hold that hotel theme and plants if necessary or ever needed in the future.

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Alright, thank you for the feedback. :slightly_smiling_face:

Great build! Two critiques: I have are that you have some intersecting parts that cause z-fighting with your materials. For that, I would suggest using ResizeAlign to make those parts line up correctly with each other, then you won’t have to eye-ball it with studio’s resize tool.

And that the main area where you spawn is lit up pretty well although other areas are lacking proper lighting. You have ceiling fixtures that aren’t emitting any light from them giving it a poorly lit environment.

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Thank you for the plugin. :slightly_smiling_face:

I’m not great at lighting, but I’ll recheck the hotel and look for the spots you’re talking about and try my best to fix it. Thank you for the feedback! :+1:

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I’m improving the lighting around the map. Thanks for letting me know, it looks much better! :+1:

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Could use some detail and more planning but overall keep trying!

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UPDATED
REPLACED LOCKER ROOM WITH BEDROOMS.
Reason: No point in having a random locker room on the third floor + needed bedrooms to give the map what it really needs.

The game is updated! Feel free to check it out. Feedback appreciated! :smiley: