Feedback on improved bedroom

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#1

I made a post yesterday asking for feedback on a bedroom build I did for my game. I took some suggestions and here is the improved one.

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#2

Looks Nice, Try using Texture Packs they bring out more detail!

#3

What’s a texture pack? I used the material tab thing.

#4

Go in Toolbox and look up texture pack, from there you will see a model with a bunch of bricks and textures. Add that in your game and copy the decals on the part and past them on the part you want to put the textures on. Make sure when you do this you ungroup the texture Model.

#5

Let me know if you have anymore questions!

#6

This would be perfect in Low-Poly style, but this is good also!
Here are some more improvements you could add by my opinion:

  1. You could use a carpet texture instead of the fabric material.
  2. The room could use a detailed baseboard and crown molding.
  3. The window should either have curtains or window shutters if you want to hide the black part.
  4. You could play a bit with half-transparent parts. You can add a yellow half-transparent part coming through the window as light.
  5. Try adding some paintings you would have in your bedroom and get creative with them.
  6. Lastly, these are some extra things you could add: Light switches, a lamp, an (alarm) clock, a radiator, an air conditioner, a trash bin, a watering can, fertilizer, basically you can get creative! :wink: I would like to see the next improvement update (If you do one)

By the way, I would like to see a render of the room. Overall I would rate this a 7.5/10 (No offence)

#7

I can definitely see some improvement. Personally, I think it looks better than before the image of your bedroom however, I see that you changed the textures on the dresser and floor I think it’s looking great, but the one thing that seems odd is the floor texture is the same material as the bed covers I would try changing it to a more different one such as a wooden floor texture and then add some sort of carpet to to the floor.

Secondly, like I said before, I feel like the door handle isn’t centered it’s still quite lowered the wall seems empty, try giving it a bit more decoration posters, pictures, shelves, etc. With the other suggestions you add to your bedroom I think it would look way better because the bedroom has the same type of texture placed on two different objects I would try fixing that.

It’s looking good so far just needs some minor improvements.