Feedback on intro cutscene and menu?

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#1

Thoughts and feedback on this intro cutscene in my game Last Stop? Anything I should add/remove, do differently, etc?

Things I’m Adding Fixing or Changing:

  • Making car drive more naturally

  • Making the player invisible and anchored until gameplay starts

  • Fading screen once play is clicked

  • Fading screen once parked and playing car door opening and shutting sounds

  • Making flat tire sound stop once car slows and pulls in

  • Debating about changing the menu music

  • More menu elements

Also, keep in mind that my character was only off to the left because I was moving in the menu. Normally the player will spawn just to the left of the car. I will be anchoring the player as I stated before.

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#2

OH MY GARSH! Sorry I’m 5 months late… I don’t know if you are still working on this… but I LOVE IT! I always loved retro horror and this looks really different from so many Roblox games… looks just like Puppet Combo! If you’re still working on this keep the car jagged, it makes it look more retro. Also love the logo.

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#3

And I would love to try out last stop if you have a working version…

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#4

o my god yes very nice and black

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#5

Yep, still working on it. Thanks for the feedback and support! I’m actually a big fan of puppet combo and wanted to capture their style.

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#6

You’re able to play it if you join the QA Group, but as of now, I haven’t released a version for anyone outside that group!

Sorry for the late response btw, I completely forgot about this post until now.

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