Feedback on island

I’ve been building on roblox for a few years, and made this small island. Thoughts?

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Those tress mesh? Same with the leafs

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I think this would look better with mesh terrain or triangle terrain. Also, you can change the water colour, transparency and more to give it more depth. But besides that its very good.

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Although the trees are low-poly and the ground is realistic, the trees seem to fit in for some reason…
An improvement you can implement is to change the color of the leaves on the trees (maybe a darker shade).

:fire:
For the torches, you can add some Surface Lights (or Point Lights) so that the area around it is illuminated. This would give a nice look to your build’s lighting.

:herb:
I love that you utilized the new grass system. I don’t have much to suggest on that, but good job!

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The island looks very lively and realistic. I have one suggestion, you could maybe use a different shade of green for some of the trees leaves.

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Amazing! You just need to change the trees color to be a bit darker

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I really like it! I’d suggest adding more clusters around the crystals :wink:

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Grass is an awesome touch, trees feel very tropical, the overall island layout looks very cool the cave is also a nice touch, keep up the great work. Are you looking for work?

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Just one minor change I would make is to brighten up the torches a bit. Overall it looks great! At first the low poly trees seemed off but after I looked at all the pictures they seemed to fit in well. Great Job!

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The only thing I’d suggest would be enabling Shadowmap, but otherwise it’s pretty nice.

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The island looks very good! But I think that the tree barks should have some material applied to them

:palm_tree: Feedback on Trees

They look good but to make them fit the map I’d suggest you to use materials on them. You can change the leaves color to a darker color.

:fire: Feedback on Torches

I’d suggest you to add point light to them.

Other than these everything looks alright.

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I did use materials on the tree, the trunk is wood, but I left the leaves as smooth plastic.