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#1

Hello!
I have decided to try to make a simple low poly island.

Coolio
Coolio1920×1080 1.26 MB

I would like to hear some feedback!

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#2

Maybe add some flower meshes? It looks good so far.

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#3

It would look very nice if you add textures to the island! But very good.

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#4

Maybe making the Tree Trunk more irregular… like “not straight” lol

Other than that, it’s really good!

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#5

It looks great so far! In my opinion, the grass and tree color is a bit too light, maybe make it a darker green! Also try making the tree trunk less straight as @Discgolftaco231 said. Amazing work!!!

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#6

Looks good! But just from looking at it, you could add a little bit more detail. This, of course, comes along with more practice. I’ll try suggesting a few things and hopefully, it helps! :+1:

  • Tree

    I first noticed that the tree looks a little bland, you can fix this by making the “balls” / leaves of the tree multicolored and different shades of green. (I’ll put an example below)

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    You should also put little branches sticking out below the leaves. (Also shown in the example above)

  • Grass

    The grass could also use some texture, to solve this try adding in little grass patches. This makes the grass look less flat and more 3D!

  • Colors

    The green you used looks a little too ‘minty’ for me. This might be based on personal preference but in my opinion, you should try using a darker shade of green.

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#7

I really like the colors you used on this building, and of course your style, my only recommendation would be to perhaps add some objects around the map, such as bushes and a beehive hanging down a tree branch? Up to you though, excellent building!

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