Hey there, I’m XareezX, a GFX artist. I recently made a GFX and I just want your feedback on what I could improve on.
If there’s anything I could improve on please write them in the comments. TY!! 
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I dont know if it would really make the difference. It looks pretty good. All I can think of is…
What if you added the police lights to the actual police cars 
. I am aware the background shouldnt draw too much attention so it could just be a light blue and red colours that are blurred. I hope you understand what I mean but other than that it looks good man 
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Its almost perfect, just a few things;
- There should be a way to distinguish the foreground from the background. Maybe a blur or rendering it separately and making it slightly lighter colored in editing software. It can help better redirect the viewer to the main subject.
- I don’t know much about GFX, but if you have 3D modelling knowledge, which I assume not (not trying to be mean), you should try to remove the windows from the car. Its a big distraction whenever the prisoner is just phasing through it, especially when its the subject closest to the camera.
- Also, like @ssado123456789 said, you should add lights to the police cars, and maybe brighten up the light of the explosion.
I’m not a GFX guy, I’m just mentioning some things that I’ve heard or assumed might work. This still looks great nonetheless.
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This jailbreak GFX looks good! Nice job on it! How long did it take to make? You should make the background a bit more blurry though so it doesn’t blend in with the character in front.
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Added some lights to the police cars, blurred the background much more like you mentioned, and some lights to the bike to give it more of a neon look to it since it’s like a futuristic bike. Hope ya’ll like it. and as for the guy clipping through the car window, maybe i’ll fix that in another GFX. But for now this is what I’m able to fix. C:
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Love the use of the old volt, I think if you changed the text that says “Jailbreak” to the actual Jailbreak text it would look 2x better.
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ayee nice I guess all thats left is to define the foreground a bit more and maybe take @bobertus00 advice and use the actual Jailbreak text 
. It might look better. Maybe leave out the helicopter in the new one though
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