Feedback on journal

Heres the result

Couldn’t put the sides sorry, got idea from the journal recreation post by @airsoft561
Book entirely made by me from watching a tutorial, feedback please. :slight_smile:

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it look good but you could make the folder of the book look dirty and old so that it look good and similar to the show

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I will make sure to edit it later

Looking great!

Only recommendation I have is to drop the brightness of your cover and the yellow binding.

The books in the show are a bit darker, but that could be due to the style of the show.

Using this picture, I took a screenshot of the cover and gold to find the hex codes if you’d like to use them.

Cover: 712B37
Binding: A28F4F

Keep up the good work!

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Thanks for the feedback, I will do that soon.

What I can say is that it’s very nice. You could try to add some edges as on the image provided by @UltimaAnthony to make look that it have pages, else I’m afraid of the copyright because I don’t understand it and I’m afraid that you will be banned by it… But really good!
(P.S.: If you could use PBR, then it would look amazing!)

Thanks for the feedback, I am not planning to upload it to roblox. Made this just for fun.

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