Feedback on Kampung Showcase

Hey guys, I just update my showcase game that I make a few weeks ago, I need you guys opinion how I can improve it more

Here a screenshot from the game

You can play the game in here

The script and House is made by my friend @asyrafaimanadib and some script from the toolbox xd

I hope you enjoy it :wink:

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Yay, someone from Malaysia! :malaysia:

Ahem, anyways, from the screenshot provided, I don’t really see too much of a kampong… They don’t usually have modern chairs or tables. :chair:
The trees also look very boreal or temperate, not rainforest-like. Also, why are there chairs and tables on a road…? :palm_tree:

To provide more feedback, could you provide more screenshots? And what are you aiming for here? For now all I know is that it’s a kampung. (・へ・)?

Before I start my grammar not very good so yeah

So I need some feedback, How I can make the Kampung look like real kampung and also make the forest more realistic and rainforest. I also have thought to make it like vibe place with animation and more but I also think that not fit the Kampung Theme

Here more screenshot from the game

If you have any feedback, I love to hear it since I want to try to improve my building and design skills e.e

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First off, it looks really nice just by itself without the title of being a kampung. Honestly, it kind of seems more like a vibe game, like you said, rather than being a rural village.

The trees, well, look like tree’s you’d find in colder areas. Rainforest trees are much taller, and, I’m not sure how to put it, just feel more vibrant. :desert_island:

The white tree that you’re currently using is a birch, which is not found in Malaysia but rather in places like Europe and North America. :deciduous_tree:

Try adding palm trees to make it feel more like a rainforest. And try adding more undergrowth, growth in the canopy, thicker trees. Etc. :palm_tree:

Before I go on, I just want to say the aesthetic is amazing but does not give off a kampong feel.

If you’re truly going for a kampong feel, well, the last image provided looks sort of alright. The skybox is perfect. But what’s bothering me the most is how modern everything looks. Let me put in some images of kampungs:

With these images, you can tell the houses are often raised off the ground. And palm trees are very common. They do not look modern. They use wood and tile, more traditional materials. Right now you’re giving me a white concrete, sleek, contemporary look.

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Honestly, my biggest peeve is that everything looks so modern. Including the blue house in the back. Now for a summary:

  1. Add palm trees, remove birch trees, and make the trees and undergrowth thicker.
  2. And stray from a modern look and aim for a rural, old-timey look.

Hope this helped, again! ヽ(^Д^)ノ

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