Feedback on kitchen and did I copy someone?

I spent the last 40 hours on this build, I was wondering if I copied someone, is this detailed enough? Can I put it up for sale and if so, how much?

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Game Link:DevDanni's Place Number: 11 - Roblox

I would like constructive feedback, please and thank you!

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It looks amazing! Just make both walls be made of the same texture or it looks off.

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How can you wonder if you copied somebody? If you copied somebody, I think you would know…

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The light needs work. The windows arent aligned, and the cabinets need more detail.

And like above said, how do you not know if you copied someone? Lol.

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Thank you for the feedback and I had issue before hand.

[edit] Also @ScytheSlayin it meant to look off aligned like this

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I mean, sure you could put it up for sale. It looks pretty good though, also for roblox I don’t think the “layered window” thing works.

@Lv100DominusUltimus I think the two different wall colours bring life into the room, rather than it just being a plain brick wall. This is actually similar to quite a few of my friends houses (including my own). Two different types of wall adjacent to eachother.

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Yeah I think you might have copied someone since you brought attention to it

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Very well then. In that case, I suggest making the brick walls out of parts to add depth to it.

That’d just add an unnecessary level of depth - it’d just look bad, the texture looks good on its own.

The layered window thing works, you just need to add more detail @DevDanni, eg add textures and make it possibly open?

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Well, it is very good and well-detailed. You can just search in the toolbox if you copied someone, but I don’t think so. I would sell it about 250R$.

This is a nice kitchen, a very nice modern design. The walls look nice and the floor. You’ve added some nice small details too, seems like has all the necessary things that kitchen has in real life. One last thing, I do not think you have copied anyone. Not seen anyone build anything similar to this on Roblox Developer Forum.

The items in the kitchen such as the mixer on the island could benefit from being modeled in blender, as the level of detail isn’t there.

This kitchen has a lot of effort and detail put into it, but the walls have a different decal texture why is that.
Other then that I would say this model/build is worth around 2,500+ robux since it’s just a kitchen model.

(Good detail though, you should continue building with this talent!)

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Kinda weird to ask if you copied someone, I’m pretty sure if you took a look at someone else’s build and completely took everything from it, you would know. Anyways other than that the lights over the table look weird, you should fix them. From the angle you provided the windows looks misplaced, as long as it’s not copied from someone else it’s looks great!

Looks nice but the textures are a tad how do I put it, ugly. And the lights, maybe a bit more work on them.

MY only complain here is that it looks too crowed,and also change the texture on that one rug

Wait, why are you asking if you have copied someone or not? Also, I can’t seem to join the place link, but the kitchen does look really clean and smooth.

Could you allow for us to join the game, I believe you have it on a setting where only you can join or only you and your friends can join. Please allow it to where everyone can join, if you can’t just delete the game link from the post.