Feedback on Lighthouse (Wip)

Hello! so currently I’m working on a showcase that includes a Lighthouse, and while I’m constructing it I feel like it’s missing something (Not including doors or windows) And I’m not sure what to add or remove.

Fixed the base a bit and added the door and windows, soon will add the light. if you have any recommendations to improve it please tell me

Reference Images:




Suggestions ands Tips will be greatly appreciated

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It is looking really well made! My main feedback would be to minimize the bulge near the base of the lighthouse, seems a bit too exaggerated. Adding the black/metal light inside would be a good touch as well. Overall though, well done :clap:

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This is what I have fixed, anything else you wish to change? and I tried to make the base of the whole thing more similar to the Reference but I found it too hard so this is what I came up with.


At the End I decided to remove like the bump and decided to make it just a straight line down

Just my opinion, but I like the straight lighthouse better :+1:

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The straight version is much better, I think it’ll look amazing once you add the windows and doors and other miscellaneous details

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I think for the straight one you should make the base a little smaller, but if you want to keep the base the same size then the curved version is the better route.

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Is the size alright now or a bit smaller?
Still have not finished the windows but I put those for now

p.s I also have a shorter version to make it more similar to the reference images, and I hope I don’t bother you but which one do you prefer?

I was meaning more to change the circumference of the base or to change the transition from the main shafts circumference to the very bottom circumference, but shortening it seems to make it look better too.

What I mean by changing the transition look at your references transition compared to yours.



The reference gradually changed from thinner to thicker while yours is more abrupt.

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Oooh that, I have tried to make it more like that that but I always made it look worse so I just stayed with that base, thanks for the feedback, I might try to change it to make it more similar to the pic.

That’s fine. Whatever you did before I explained my feedback better made it look a lot better. I think it was just the base to shaft ratio that kind threw me off.

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Thank you! I will soon add those, but I plan to make a full showcase with a pretty background, I can’t wait to finish it to show yall!

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The one on the left is the new version and the one on the right is the original. Do you prefer the new one or still believe improvements should be made?