Feedback on loading screens

I’m currently making a GTA-like game set in a dystopian post apocalyptic-ish world which will be separated in multiple maps that players will be able to travel to using metros and other transportation methods. Here are some loading screens that I’ve made so far:



The loading screens above are heavily inspired by videogames set in the 80’s and futuristic cyberpunk settings.

This loading screen has no real specific style though, but I went for a mix of old school videogames and… red gradient lines i guess which looks more menacing but minimalistic i think

Just wanting some critiques and feedback to see if people would like seeing this as a loading screen.

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Looks Great! Although if you’r using these for loading screen I recommend adding some sort of symbol, or image that spins or dilates, just to give it a loading effect, other then that great work!

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Thats pretty godly I say so myself.

Issues you could fix.

The lines in the Background It really doesn’t fit the whole theme of it. Maybe some other effect will do better.

Sighs The neon trees, (Pink) Its very well blinding my eyes. Maybe try and and a tone to it. Or a-bit of Shading.

Besides from that, Very godly! Keep it up! :innocent::blush:

It seems to me to have a mixture of “minimalistic”, “cyberpunk”, “80’s” and “Techno” aesthetics. You might want to check some Color theory to make even more pleasant pictures, I mean it more in the first and second picture (the third one only uses red) which have a mix of pink, yellow and aqua green, which dont seem to go well. You could take the opportunity and make it be cyan, yellow and pink (I believe you intended this), but it’s not a good-looking combination. The second one just seems like many things combined together, not in the “too detailed” way but in the “too many lasers” way. add some color theory to it, color psychology too if you want, and see if you believe it got improved. The second one has a vibe of there being dust on the image, and it makes it uncomfortable to look at.

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