Feedback On Lobby Build For Hotel!

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#1

Hey Devforumers!

How do you like my lobby build for a hotel? What can I improve?

Please keep in mind not all of the planned stuff is on the walls due to me not finding a game name yet… if you have ideas please post them below. Thanks!

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Front Of It, Where You Enter

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Left Wall

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Right Wall

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BUILDERS ONLY: Pick an option! :slight_smile:
  • Outstanding!
  • Very good, but there’s one think I’d change… (Reply)
  • Good, but could use improvement… (Reply)
  • Ugh, you call this a build?!? (Lol, please reply why)

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Thanks! :slight_smile:

#2

i say its good for a start but a couple things. 1 you should use other textures its all the same wood texture. 2 its lacking detail and i dont know what the picture is on the left wall but you should change it. 3 add stuff like chairs plants tables just different things because its empty and looks boring.

#3

Yea, I was going to add chairs and tables and stuff to make it more realistic but I’m mainly looking for “How does this look in a realistic sense (not low-poly)?”.

The picture on the left wall is a TV that I’m going to add text to soon.

#4

Huh? I dont know what you mean

#5

Like does this look somewhat like a lobby you’d see IRL?

#6

not really at all, hotel lobbys have much more detail and arent usually that small and shaped like a box
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#7

Ok, thanks for your feedback. I’ll ping you when I update this with the decorations added :slight_smile:

#8

Ok great and no problem. also dont forget to change some of the textures

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#9

I hate to pick the rude-sounding option but I find more wrong with this than I find right with it.

The thing that bugs me the most about this build is the walls; they’re too thin, especially for exterior walls. The paper-thin walls you have now don’t look that structurally sound, kind of like the building is made of cardboard.

When I build, my interior walls are around the thickness you have now, and the exterior ones are at least a stud thick if not more. Of course, these are rough guidelines and it depends on the nature of the build and also personal preference.

On a more positive note, I think you have a good start on your colour palette, even though it’s just different shades of brown. I see a lot of novice builders slap a bunch of neon colors together and it never looks good, but this is already miles ahead of that.

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#10

Thanks for the constructive criticism! I’ll take all of this into account when redesigning. :slight_smile:

I am making the whole game by myself as I don’t want to have to have a team so yes, I am doing all the building and I am a novice builder.

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