Feedback On Logo Recreation

I decided to randomly just do a logo earlier today, I’ve been in an out of logo creating for about 2 years now and wouldn’t refer to myself as an experienced or professional designer.

Anyways, the first dropdown below is the original and the second dropdown is the remake made by me. I’m thinking about getting into logo commissions. Any feedback or advice is welcome! :happy4:

Original

My Remake

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the goal on the right is oddly pixlated

also the og had more going on in the background(sunrays) to make the background look a little more than just a duplication of the main logo but slightly transparent

Overall I think its pretty good. However, doing commisions requires some creative liberty. Here you had somthing to base your recreation off of. Most of the commission you will get probably wont have anything to go off of. So just make sure you got the creativity to make somthing up from scrach.

you got the technical skills tho! good job!

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This remake looks good, nice job on it!