Feedback on Low-Poly Build

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#1

So, this is my first attempt at at low-poly builds and I want some feedback.The store is also not intended to have anything interior.

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Here’s the place if you want to visit.for a closer look.

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#3

Hey GenPacaKent, your build is amazing, but in my opinion, I think that the pumpkin decals should become an actual model.

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#4

The cars look pretty nice. The map is a bit small though. Maybe add some more detail to the windows on the farm building because the windows look like the door except the door is down lower.

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#5

I suggest fixing this, probably by Negate/Union
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Also, you should even the end of the car with the frame
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These two parts are colliding,
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The oranges are floating,
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And you should anchor the fruits.
Last thing. The doors are weird, they are just frames. Maybe fill them in?
Ok, last thing for sure. This side of the building is a different color then the others.
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Edit: I forgot this,
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It needs to connect

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#6

I love low poly builds! This one isn’t an exception to that! I would only suggest to get some lighting effects in there to tie the whole build up, then it should be perfect :smile:.

#7

This build looks good, however there are things that you could improve on

  • The floor is overlaying with other parts of the floor, which personally could get a bit annoying

  • One side of the farm has a different colour to the rest of the sides, which is inconsistent

  • Some of the trees are just blocks, some of them are more detailed and have more of a shape, this is also quite inconsistent

  • I don’t know if this is intended or not, but the fruits are unanchored. You can kick them everywhere

  • On the police car, there are parts that are overlapping

  • You should model your own pumpkin rather than using a decal, as if you look at the decal and zoom in onto it, it’s low resolution

Other than that, awesome build!

#8

Make the decal here: image a model.

#9

The map looks good, but the pumpkin at the top of the house should be a model, I agree

#10

This is a very nice build. The colors go especially well together which makes it pretty appealing. My favorite part though has to be the cars. Remind me of showcases by BlastB00m and add a unique retro feel to it. :+1:

#11

Windows need color, right now they are brown, just like the rest of the build, if you change it it would look nice.

#12

Quite above basic, but still smoothly colored. I’d say it’s quite well done. Try adding a few bricks to the shop for some detail, and experiment with wedges and other parts. Those square trees arent the best addition to your build.

#13

Thanks for the feedback, will take what you guys said into account.

#14

I just followed a concept art. Regarding the trees, it was was never aimed to be consistent. Consistency isn’t always better as consistency makes everything uniform. The block trees broke that uniformity.

#15

The build looks amazing I love the colours! It has a really great feel to it and really looks like you took time and effort with it!