Hello! I am a new low-poly builder. I have spent 6 months worth of building
It would be great to receive feedback on the exterior of a cafe I am currently creating. I am aware that it’s not perfect.
Here are some screenshots
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It looks great i love the design of the cafe I really love how you added the mountains. Keep up the great work and good luck on the cafe. Love the cafe! 
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I appreciate your response. Thank you! 
I really like the magical kind of feel to the cafe and terrain! I imagine the inside will be just as good! 
Think it looks great personally, although, I’d add a bit more terrain (e.g, mountains all around the map and a bit more grass), other than that, it’s great!
Thank you so much! I wanted to do something different.
Nice cafe I like the cartoony looks of the exterior, which fits in with the surroundings. However the, exterior of the building itself is really nice. The Skybox gives it a nice feel too, but the terrain is lacking. There is very little detail and you can make it nicer by adding benches, more trees, etc. Add a pathway to the building itself, this could be stones or just a complete pathway just a simple suggestion.
I would highly recommend adding more to the grass, such as adding lights and better plants, as well as maybe try expanding the land to add bits of details here and there? Overall, the building is great, looks amazing, however, the general outside area looks poorly made, you could definitely try and improve on it however it looks perfect so far.
Other than that, it looks amazing!
Yes I agree. I will definitely add more in the future. Thanks!
Thank you for your feedback. I agree that the terrain and scenery needs improvement. All of what you have stated has been envisioned in my mind from the start. This is definitely a just rough draft. I didn’t want to get too far without any input from others. I will keep your comment in mind. Thanks again!
Looks really good and very cartoonish. I recommend adding more detail to the build like maybe a logo of some sorts to the front. Also instead of Cafe maybe give it a name. Overall I think the building looks really good and maybe just some small details could really make it pop.
For sure. I was planning on changing it in the future for anyone who is interested in this design. Thank you so much for your input.
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I’m not a fan of where the logo word ‘Cafe’ for some reason, because the ‘c’ is going above the roof which I don’t like to see. I would also like to see more details instead of windows like a trashcan, crates, etc.
I really like your cafe build and I think it’s really good!
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I think it looks amazing! There are so many cafes on Roblox that it’s really refreshing to see something like this. I really like the low-poly aesthetic and the colours you’ve done with. The only suggestion I have would to have some sort of path or landing to guide the player towards the cafe. Apart from that, it looks great and I can’t wait to see the inside. Keep up the good work.
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Well, I for sure love the terrain, it looks amazing! Although, the cafe itself is a little out of place.
- Extend the back walls further as they’re shorter than the front.
- Rather extend the bottom up or lower the front walls.
- Add more colours to allow more of an appealing look, add brown or lighter and darker shades of the different colours already used in the building.
- Add more detail to the terrain, add some rock features, water streams, shorter grass features, perhaps a cave in the back, etc.
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Well I’d just like to say that is a pretty cool island.
Color schemes real attracting and I like the shape of the building . You could probably add a little more details to the tower if anything, something materialistic.
Overall, super cool build!
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Thank you! I will make sure to add that in the future.
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Hey!
I really like the vibe the cafe is giving out. Furthermore, its originality is what makes it so unique and different from other cafe showcases.
The only thing I’d suggest is try adding some form of barrier. If it’s just floating it kind of ruins the whole cafe vibe. If you were aiming to create a floating land type of theme try adding some other smaller islands close to it to give it a better look.
Good luck!