Greetings again fellow developers,
Today I got bored and decided to see what I could make in a low poly format, after working about two solid hours or so I came up with the game linked below, it is a small, worn-down cottage with a vibrant rose garden around the back and overgrown bushes. Please let me know what I could improve on!
The house itself looks pretty good. I dont really like the bushes around the house.
I feel the bushes just are too large and blocky. I would try adding different type of bushes.
Thanks!
I thought they did look a bit weird as well, I think I will import custom Blender meshes for my bushes later today instead of those ones.
The house looks good, I think the broken fences used in this are too excessive, maybe make a couple broken. If you want to keep them that way, maybe add something to the house that would also make it look damaged.
Intentional?
Oops, didn’t see that bit, I’ll lower that part later. And I most probably will remove a couple of the fences.
I love the house. The colors and design are amazing As said above, the fences don’t really do much, maybe make only a couple broken, with most still intact. The front step and the main floor are overlapping.
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One last minor detail, there is a random part sticking out.!
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Your low poly house looks pretty amazing! This looks to be your first cottage house it shows a lot of details added to it, looks really nice however there is a couple of things. You could improve on and add to look like a ‘Worn Down House’ overall it still looks good, i like the color scheme you have implemented on the house.
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Your house looks really good, however the color you have on the roof doesn’t look that good you could add a different texture/color to your. Roof instead of having it blue as well the chimney is the same color as the roof i’ll change, that to a brick material or a stone material, as most cottage houses have different! material on the house and the. Details that’s on it i’ll just fix that two things to make it look more better.
Details
I see you added some broken fences. Around the house i think that looks good i’ll probably just add a couple to the house and you could, add some trees and some vines onto the house, as well you could add some broken pieces on the ground! That fell of the house to look like. It been there for a long time just to make the house, feel worn down you could maybe make some of the windows broken. To it as well however it looks really good!!
Finally, Your house looks decent it has a lot of details onto it. And it looks like a worn down house as i said above you could add some broken, pieces on the ground to look more better and try adding some weeds and trees around the house! Anyway great job, can’t wait to see more of your work very soon!
