Feedback on low poly shop

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#1

Hello everyone.

So i was just playing around yesterday, and i decided to make a little low poly shop and see how it turns out.

It took me about 20 minutes to get this done, i would love to get some feedback & suggestions on what i could possibly improve or change. (Don’t mind the background lol)

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#2

This looks great! Are you going to use it in a game?

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#3

ill give this a 6/10 the front looks good the sides could have more stuff on them
Sav

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#4

I like this! A recommendation i have is to make the neon less glowy or trying using another material or color. You will include stuff inside?

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#5

Very cool i’ll give it a 7/10
You should add

  • More stuff on the back and sides.
  • Less glow on the sign.
    But its good!
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#6

Looks, like simulator shop :+1:

#7

That’s amazing! I think you should add… maybe a window on the sides?

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#8

I might actually, but i don’t have any plans for it right now. Thanks for the feedback !

#9

Yup i was thinking about changing the material of the Shop sign, as it glows way too much. Thanks for the suggestion, and no i wouldn’t add anything inside.

#10

Definitely would try that out, see how it turns out. Thanks for the feedback.

#11

This is so well-done! The neon behind the letters is a little bit overwhelming, but other than that, I think it looks great!

Personally, I think if you were to add windows or other things on the sides, it might start to look cluttered—what you have on the front is more than enough. However, it’s always worth a try!! :slightly_smiling_face:

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#12

I was thinking the same, but i’ll give it a try and see how it turns out. Thanks for the feedback!

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#13

Looks good so far, but one thing that confuses me, is that shop sign supposed to be levitating up in the air?

#14

I wanted to add a background to it at first, but ended up leaving it floating. Definitely isn’t supposed to be floating though lol. Thanks for the feedback.

#15

The window glare thing needs more variation.

#16

I did take notice of that, but i didn’t have any other variation ideas.

It would be great if you could provide me pictures or suggestions on how to make different variations out of that.

#17

https://www.google.com/url?sa=i&url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.123rf.com%2Fphoto_126057936_stock-vector-set-of-isolated-white-plastic-pvc-room-windows-with-handle-glare-on-glass-different-balcony-door-and.html&psig=AOvVaw3bkbJFW3y1tqkynEtUVwFg&ust=1611853307212000&source=images&cd=vfe&ved=0CAIQjRxqFwoTCMiGr9TLvO4CFQAAAAAdAAAAABAD

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#19

Thank you Crazedbrick1
I was too lazy to put an image.

#20

Thanks for the help @Crazedbrick1, @Fas_ty35.

I would try to play around with the glare until i come out with another variation, those pictures would definitely help aswell.

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