I recently finished my Low-Poly Supermarket, tell me what you think.
I would like feedback on how I can improve! Thanks guys.
I would like feedback on how I can improve! Thanks guys.
Maybe add some more detail to the windows? Also the doors need to be resized.
Just looks like a box at the moment.
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Sort of looks almost incomplete, maybe move the windows a bit further from the doors and remove those signs on them, also you can install a text plugin to make better text for the sign. Doesn’t seem like a great build yet, but if you keep working to improve it, it could become great.
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Thanks, I’m not the best at making types of Supermarkets, so I’m kinda new to building big stuff. I’ll do your suggestions.
Thanks, I’m not the best at making types of Supermarkets, so I’m kinda new to building and building big stuff, but I’ll make sure to add your suggestion.
Did you make this in Blender or Studio?
Studio, Meteor0oid, 
I used studio.
It looks great, at a start, but it isn’t low poly. It seems a tad bit rushed, I would recommend putting more time into creating a more detail build the one you currently made doesn’t resemble a supermarket looking at a few images to get the full detail would possibly improve the overall feel.
It would look better with more vibrant colors and possibly different shape supermarkets aren’t square looking, you could try adding a variety of shapes however, this is a big issue if it fits the style of your game I’ll improve it.
I feel like you should change or remove the sign on the building as it doesn’t look good the doors seem cluttered and tight place windows, maybe give it a more better color so it doesn’t look very dull around your build as it’ll look basic and plain, it could use a proper roof I’ll try changing the color scheme and see what looks good. By the way, supermarkets tend to have larger windows and vents on the roof. Not sure if you already included them.
As an experienced builder, I don’t think this is Low-poly to me, Its got minor detail and looks quite rushed. For some help I think you could look on Google for example to look at some inspiration on the details.
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Umm maybe add some more details it looks like a box though
As I may come off as rude, I’m sorry to say that, that is not a low poly build. It looks a bit too blocky and has very minor detail. To make it better, you could use google to search up low poly builds and try to copy them? Keep doing things like that and with experience, you shall become better. Hopefully this feedback helps!
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(Don’t take it as I’m being rude, these are all tips to help ya)
1st. A single huge block isn’t what a “lowpoly” build has
2nd. The door, in and out, is WAY to long & is too thin
3rd. The text’s aren’t that good, too long & can’t even read it…
4th. Man the windows, you just added 2 parts and just colored it, one is fat and the other was is small, add a transparent window
5th. The green lines you got is too thin, make it a little fat
6th. Add more windows
7th. Make one door, 1 door = in and out, why there gotta be 2?
8th. The top ceiling got ABSOLUTELY no decoration & the whole build, add some props in it.
All I gotta say is that you are beyond new to building, you need to improve! Maybe watch youtube vids? Goodluck buddy! 
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