Hello! I have been working a new lobby for my game, i might need a little bit of feedback on what to get rid of and what to add.
Note: This may not look like a lobby but i am open to feedbacks to make it look better.
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Looks pretty good, but there is a few things I noticed. Also a question, what will this game be about? This lobby seems awfully large.
I noticed the shadows were acting a little weird, I’m thinking it is because of how fast the day and night cycle is going. In the first image I found this brick that wasn’t positioned right I think. The farms feel copy and pasted and look like they are there to just fill in space. When it becomes night time, the water looks really bad.
Some things I did like was the sunset over the mountain looked really nice. The map looked like it had time and effort put in to it. During the day time, the whole map looks really nice.
Hope this helps!
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Thank You for your feedback! I looked at the images very thoroughly and i did see those mistakes coming now to acknowledging it, The day night cycle is a bit weird and yes does go very fast and will have to change for the lighting sake. For the water that isn’t exactly a Building mistake its more of a lighting mistake and will probably have to dim it down a little.
I think it would look better with some more of those mountains. Maybe all the way around it or something, the empty water looks bleh.
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Overall loving the general aesthetic
Maybe a small obstacle course in the water using low poly rocks could add some diversity to the lobby along with filling some empty space.
Some more variety in the landscape, and boats but other than that beautiful work 
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Wow! Didn’t think of such an idea and a filler for the lobby, thank you for your feedback!
This looks amazing! If you could add more background additions like the mountains or maybe a few ships it’d look even better.
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It looks nice but the background is empty, you can fill the background with more mountains or ships. 
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The entirety of the place, in general, looks great! But just from my opinion, the background of the lobby looks a bit empty I would try adding mountains around the land so it could fill in the empty spaces I would currently work on that a bit more.
This lobby is pretty good for a low poly build. The only problem I can see with it is that it feels like it’s a bit empty you could try adding some secret places, (obstacle course) around the lobby so players could play around on depending if you want to that in your build.
Another thing I would suggest you could try adding some boats tied up at the dock I see you added one and some in the water, but you could possibly add boats lined up and tied to the docks you could get an idea in the image on what I’m taking about below overall the map looks. Really good, I would try adding some wooden boxes next to the medieval houses that could reward players.
You can add anything that is according to the game genre, however, is this for a game? Or is just a practice build you wanted to make. Overall, it’s looking very amazing.
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This Medieval castle lobby ito be honest will be appreciate by many games.
- The lighting
- The live color
- The way the terrain was built in such a way that it looks great quality
- Kid gamers love games that have cartoonish-style textures
In my opinion the lobby is great though you should put some more light poles because I saw the game turns to night and more light poles will be appreciated by users if they played this. Also, the fact this is a lobby, more light in the gardens will be appreciated.
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