Feedback on Maid-tastrophe!

[WinterTimeCrimes]

Hello there,

I need some feedback on a recent story-game I created. It’s quite short, but I wanted it to be that way.

https://www.roblox.com/games/5907170434/Maid-tastrophe-DEMO

Thanks! You can DM me or send messages through this thread.

[LifeDigger (Life)]

So here are some suggestions:
Make this less bright

Turn down the zoom.

[PotatoVampire7797]

Yeah lots of little fixes but its a great start. Cant wait to see how this evolves. maybe add different stories and mysteries to see. I like the way you use the players as part of the story and had people vote on which way to go!