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#1

Hello! I am a beginner map builder who the programmer ParticularlyPenguin hired. I have made him his map, but as I am a beginner it is not one of the best. I made a small map with the theme of “Deserted Desert City” in mind. It contains buildings of many sizes and shapes, as well as boarded windows and corners with boxes in them. Any feedback on how to improve my building skills would be appreciated! Thanks in advance,
Noah
(LostInSpace2090)
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#2

Looks pretty nice! I’d give it a 8-9 but still I’d say it’s good. :+1: Keep up the good work!

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#3

Why thank you! Your kind feedback is appreciated. : )

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#4

Hey, thats great work for a beginner. Keep grinding!

Heres some plugins that may help you up your game (:smile:

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#5

Ok, Thanks for the tips, I will try to use those tools in the future.

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#6

Hey @LostInSpace2090

Not bad for a beginner build, though I do have a bit of feedback that I can provide for you that can enhance the map and add more detail.

  • You should add some more props/assets to the areas of the map, examples are some cactus, dead tree branches around the map etc.

  • With the addition to the above suggestion, you should add more elevation to the map, you can use triangle terrain to apply this. :+1:

  • Lastly, you can add more details to the houses. As the boarded houses is a great idea, you should also add broken doors and more details to the house, also make the roofing for the house slightly darker than the main body of the house.

I suggest Atrazine’s Terrain Plugin V2 for the second suggestion, its a huge help! Atrazine's Terrain Plugin V2 - Roblox

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#7

Thanks for the tips! I shall implement them in future builds or edits of this build! :slight_smile:

#8

Please don’t be mad. I would give this a 6 or 7 tbh. The only thing it lacks is that is 1 model copy and pasted while being scaled. I say a abandoned city is not a neighborhood, I don’t see how they could have escaped since there is nothingness void behind them, he houses are in a circle, making no exit. Maybe give it more life. Like Cacti and plants. I live in Nevada and its basically a sand town, but there is many plants like cacti, palm trees, many things. Maybe try to add some rocks or trees to make it look alive. NO PINE TREES, THERE ARE NO PINE TREES IN A DESERT. Maybe add textures to the house or space it out for the people not to be trapped. How were they also supposed to get inside with out doors?

#9

think it as a real city and not as a outline, just give it more life.

#10

Ok, thanks. That is good things I should think about while maybe revising this build.

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#11

This is great for a beginner, but not so much when you compare yourself to the big league, i.e. modelers like me. If you want to get better, I recommend to download blender and a few other applications that may be helpful, along with tutorials associated to blender, in order for you to advance your skills in building. Have fun learning to model!

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#12

Not bad for a beginner, but I recommend you add more detail, such as doors, a couple of more windows on some of the buildings, and maybe some balcony’s or plants. Other then that very good build.

#13

Thank you. This feedback is appreciated!

#14

Thanks! Good luck to you as well as you progress! :slight_smile:

#15

It looks great for now but I’d say you could add more details into the houses and maybe some textures. Keep the good work :wink:

#16

Thanks for giving feedback! :smiley:

#17

Great Work!

At doors to the buildings? :smiley: