Feedback on map commission - Hydropower

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#1

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Hello everyone!! This is my first ever post on the DevForum.

Apologies if I am in the wrong place, or formatting anything incorrectly!

I’d like to show off my latest finished map commission, a CTF map named Hydropower, and possibly get some feedback on it!

Screenshots

Overview

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hydropower_3
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Blue Side

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hp3
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Red Side

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#2

This looks amazing! Great job on it! I love all the colors and how they go together!
Good job!

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#3

This looks fantastic! I am very impressed.

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#4

impressivo, me likey the detail

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#5

Incredibly well made! Out of curiosity how much did you charge for a map like this?

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#6

Typically for a map of this playable size, maybe upwards from 200k? I’m not totally sure. I don’t currently have any sort of commission sheet at the moment, so I’m just eyeballing it based on the payments I’ve been given for my previous commissions.

#7

So, you wanted feedback. From the perspective of the average user:

  1. windows. Instead of glass I see paper. Try to make them more reflective;
  2. the sky. Such clouds do not match the style of your map;
  3. Overview screenshot. I would change the gray color of the vertical bars of the dam to red and blue, respectively.