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#1

Hello Roblox Developers!

I have been messing around in Roblox Studio for a while, and I made this map.

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Time taken: 4 Hours

Parts: 9,322

I would love some feedback!

Bye!

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#2

1 the trees are just duplicated, maybe you can rotate them a little and make them some big ones.
2 the top of a tree is literally a square you can make it better.
3 the buildings look very nice!

#3

First of all, it would be helpful to describe what you’re aiming for. Then we could provide better advice.

I would recommend maybe making the trees not so grid-like, to the point where it gets repetitive. :evergreen_tree:
All the trees are also the same shape, color, size, oriented the same, etc. very unnatural looking.

I would also recommend adding bumps to the terrain, so it isn’t just flat.
There appears to be floating houses in the ocean? That doesn’t make sense. :house:
And the lake is also very square, it could have some parts deeper, a more organic shape, etc.

Hope this helped-

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#4

The trees are supposed to be blocks. Other than that, thanks for the reply!:heart:

#5

For the forest you should definitely change up the trees: move them so they aren’t in an orderly manner, make different sizes and shapes etc) and maybe add some other things like plants, rocks or animals. Also in one of the photos it looks like houses are floating? Maybe fix that.
I do like the small town area though, looks very cute. Maybe change the buildings to be different colours/materials so they don’t all look the same.
If you improve this map it will look very nice! :raised_hands:

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#6

Sorry about the houses in the ocean, that isn’t supposed to be there. Thanks on the feedback.:heart:

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#7

This map is quite depressing or it reminds me of this horror game where the town folk were murdered one by one… There is no color to it and the trees are in line and just copy pasted. 4 hours seems like too long for this. Honestly, it could have some potential as a horror game map with more work but otherwise, not much else. Also, buildings are quite small. hope this helped

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#8

Yeah I especially agree with the no colour part. It maes the map quite boring to look at. Is it necessary for every building to be gray? How about adding a few colours in there.

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