So I made some models for my military game. I would like to know how I can improve them. (These are made in Roblox studio because I don’t know how to use Blender)
The concrete barrier could have lil yellow caution lines down or across it, other then that they look pretty good.
I really like this style and I think it would be worth it to learn how to use Blender. You can achieve exactly what you have without the hassle. Trust me, it makes working with complex shapes (Especially your first picture) a whole lot easier.
To do the dropdown menu, click the Gear icon on your post:
Then click “Hide Details” and it will insert one.
As not a proffessional modler you don’t have to take my comments seriously but I think you should search up what a real scope looks like when you look into it so you can make it look more real. Idk, just a personal comment.
such amazing work done there… what are you gonna do with the model?
Everything looks pretty nice, but i think concrete wall needs to be better.
In the fence part, there is a little gap left right above the decal that you had placed in the wall with Transparency 1, try to fill it.
Overall the rest looks just great and it has total perfection! Keep up the good work!
Looks already good to me. I guess you could apply a small fake brand decal on the scopes but it’s just an idea.
They are for my military themed third person shooter
but how many models you made in this “FPS” 
The color combinations are a little weird. You’d be hard pressed to find a red dot sight that’s two-tone using black and light grey. I understand the differentiation for accenting, so maybe just make the colors a little more similar?
They’re pretty low detail models (compared to something that might come out of blender), but if that’s what you’re going for then I think it looks good.
As for the concrete barrier, I agree with the previous comments that it looks a little bland. You might add a couple notches on the top or the two holes in the middle that they sometimes have in real life.
Overall I think it looks good. Keep it up! (and don’t be afraid to learn Blender, it’ll change your life)
