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#1

Hey there! I’m looking for some feedback on a recent showcase build I did!

I’m fairly new to building, though I’m getting a little better everyday. Please be as honest as possible, even if you totally dislike every aspect of the build. All feedback is appreciated. Thank you. :slight_smile:

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#2

I’ve known Hayden for 70 years now and this is a masterpiece. This is the finest work of art I’ve seen and I’m delighted to call Hayden my friend! Keep up the good work bucko and happy 90th Birthday!

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#3

Hey, Hayden!

I really how the build is cozy. It gives me a warm feeling, and makes me wanna see more of your builds. Please keep up the good work, and I can’t wait to see more builds like this one! :slight_smile:

Regards,
Sy

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#4

Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it! I’ll make sure to do more similar lighting in other builds! :slight_smile:

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#5

Wot? Is Hayden a wizard that lives forever?

  1. I love the build! I think some things need to be added on the roof. Maybe solar panels!
  2. Where are the coffee machines? It just looks like a sitting place.
  3. Tone down the reflectivity please. The metal looks more like a mirror.

Also, how long have you’ve been building for?

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#6

Woah. This is brilliant. I actually thought you’d have been building for at least a year until I saw the first few sentences. Good luck on your journey!

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#7

Thanks! That’s a pretty good suggestion, I’ll make sure to do solar panels!

I wasn’t entirely sure where to put a kitchen after finishing the exterior so I decided it would be like an “order on your phone” type of thing and you have it delivered to you

And I’ve been building since late July of this year

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#8

If that’s the case, I would add some instructions or some thing that tells me that you order with your phone.

You’re insane. Teach me master pl0x. I started last year and this is what I have. :joy:

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#9

LOL, well technically, I’ve been building for several years, but I was one of those skids who just made a game full of random crap and out of free models

but yeah, I didn’t actually start taking my interest in Studio to a serious level until a few months back

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#10

Everyone starts out like that. :sweat_smile:

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#11

Is he really 90 years old or am I just being a complete idiot

Also, that is a really awesome build, keep up the good work @5inatra

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#12

I’m 99.9999% positive that it is a joke.

@5inatra, will you be adding surrounding buildings?

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#13

no, I’m not ninety haha :joy_cat:

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#14

I might add some other buildings. Not too sure yet, though

I kinda discontinued the project. It was really just meant as an example to showcase what I’m capable of at the moment

#15

That looks great pretty realistic lighting is nice! Its nice the backround is good!
Great

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#16

It looks good, it could be a bit better. I would try not to make the outside chairs that reflective. And in my opinion it could be a bit bigger. But overall good job!

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