Feedback on More Advertisements

Hello! I know I have been posting a lot about my advertisements but I made some skyscraper and banner ones for you today.

This one is for a group named Boxed Frog Studios:

This banner ad is my favorite: (some people might think it is bland but I just think the colors go great together)

This one is my endorsing my friends group that is also above

How do you like these, have I improved? Please be honest and respectful, thanks!

Edit: I know these sort of funny ads are popular so I decided to make one for my friend’s group.

There good although I would improve by:

  • Use less words, sometimes people don’t like to read since there lazy
  • Use vibrant colors so more people are like “Wow colorful most click”
  • I would also make the banners more neat, they kind of every where
  • and finally make them more appealing and interesting to look at since the cooler the more I want to click

anyways hope this helps :slight_smile:

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The “JOIN TODAY” green outline text of the first ad is a little hard to read, maybe just make it brighter so that it’s more easily readable.