Hi. So, the last days, i’ve been working in some GFX. Im not an expert making GFX, so i was wondering if you can give me some feedback on some of them.
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Picture 1: the lights on the ground look like they’re coming from the bottom of the car, since the actual car headlights aren’t lit up in some way. The light shining on the sand has a small area for sheen, making the sand look ultra-smooth, like plastic. The cacti look a little blocky.
Picture 3: once again, the cacti look a little blocky and the entire thing seems a little bland. Nothing is really happening. Maybe make some dust behind the truck tires, to simulate movement, and make the green truck a more tan color for camo (it looks like an army truck, disregard if it isn’t)
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It’s a pretty nice GFX for a beginner, but there’s still a lot of room for improvement. For the first and last GFX, I think you should work more with the texture of the sand. Besides that, I don’t think the lights from the car isn’t necessary, since it’s day time. For the second GFX, I think you can give the character some poses to make it look better. Other than that, nice job.
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Not much of a GFX artist but can give some feedback on first look
Picture 1: It looks like you’re lacking of detail on the shadow of the cactus, they look kinda thin to me. But I like the model of the car and the two police cars, they’re looking really realistic, although the lights from there is on, but the still, the lights of the police cars needs to be shown at the siren of the car itself
Picture 2 looks good enough
Picture 3: Just as what @MeganatSA said, the cactus looks kinda blocky, try thickening it to make it look more like a cactus. The sky and shadows on those objects don’t really match up I suppose. I suggest giving the sky to a more sunset scenery. That would make it more better
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Thank you so much for your feedback, for tomorrow i will improve the GFXs.
I really like them and even though this isn’t my field of development I’m good at, I will give feedback. Yes, the cacti do look blocky but for me the problem is that the sand just looks bland maybe add a texture to it to make it look realistic. By the way this is for pictures 1 and 3 but on picture 3 also, the sky looks bland and I don’t think (in my opinion) that it should look like that - maybe make it light blue!
I like picture 2! I honestly don’t have any critiques for it! Great Job!!
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Looks good, I feel picture three. The wheels clip into the sand, maybe try fix that! But good overall!
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I agree with others on the sand/cacti. For the second one, I recommend bending the limbs to make it look more realistic.
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