criticism and feedback
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Looks nice but too generic. Maybe change the denim to become red so the color scheme of the mushroom could match with the entire backpack and could stick to the “mushroom theme”;
I don’t understand the purpose of these is? I thought they were tape but they’re not and the mushrooms are not aligned symmetrically, I don’t know if that is intentional or not but just pointing that out.
As well as the stripes are not textured like the denim, they’re almost like plastic textured so that seems off as well as the colors of the stripes from the top are different than the bottom.
Other than that it looks great and the design is really great and I like the simple style of it!
I love the design but I feel the mushroom design should match the denim material, for now the mushrooms just look out of place.
thanks for the feedback! the things in picture 2 are the backpack straps. And the reason the fabric looks plastic-y is because I am still new to texturing. I will try to improve more on this design. Thanks!