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#1

Hello!

Gonna keep this short and sweet due to being on mobile. I have made some music and am hoping for some honest feedback.

That’s all, thank you.

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#2

Maybe I’ll list it.

  • The sub-bass is actually overpowering the mix a little, it doesn’t give any room for the bass kick. You can sidechain compression the kick to it. Lowering the gain of it is also optional.
  • I like the plucking sounds that pans continuously around, but I am not fond of the brightness.
  • An idea is to keep your drum a pause before giving the next section a push(transitioning strategies).
  • You can improve your drums with more interesting pattern(s):

  • Layer some hi-hats on top of the drums with 16th notes in some pattern… This one is up to you.
  • The rhythmic lead needs a bit if dialing back I suppose, or needs to make room for the guitar through EQ.
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#3

Just an FYI: I completely forgot to mention I have not done any mixing.

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#4

This music sounds very good! Nice job on it!

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