Feedback on Music

Hello!

I have made a very simple song! It will soon be uploaded on my youtube but, it’s not about that. I need some feedback from you amazing creators! Can you please tell me how I did? Feel free to tell me in ANY manner!

Audio:

Thanks,
Akridiki
Kieran

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This makes me feel I’m trapped in a matrix or some sort of Sci-Fi ish. It’s pretty nice, but the part where like the big noise comes after a few second of the music starts kinda scared me. Try to make it so that it slowly goes higher and intense.

Nice job.

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Hello! Thank you so much for the feedback. I made it so it goes at once just to show that, life can just start going uphill in like what, few seconds? This is suppose to re-visualize my life. Ups and downs but I am trying to give a people a point by MUSIC of how life can just turn upside down and right side up! That’s why there was that IMMEDIATE beat! There was no indication like real life!

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The sawtooth lead should have some tweaked ADSR, increase the attack and the release. This pattern is also very repetitive and it is disrupting the rhythm. The other elements are fine though.

The square bass should have some relaxed cutoff on its filter, just filter out the sub a little for about -3 dB.

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