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#1

Hello, people on Dev Forum my name is DevNetCheese. I have been making music since I was 15 year old. I am now 17 I want you guy’s feedback on some music I made some weeks ago.
Give me a rating 1-10, and tell me which one you love the best.

*https://soundcloud.com/op-wr-tiny-bot-gaming/looking-up-in-the-stars
*https://soundcloud.com/op-wr-tiny-bot-gaming/night-time
*https://soundcloud.com/op-wr-tiny-bot-gaming/intro-3
*https://soundcloud.com/op-wr-tiny-bot-gaming/deep-sea-finder

Thanks, for reading I hope you have a nice day.

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#2

Hi there! I really think that the second style suits you. It seems to have more… meaning to it, than the other tracks. Certainly good work though! I do think that the tracks are a bit repetitive, so it would be good to “Explore the Keyboard” as I would say! :slight_smile:

I’ll give my honest opinion for you.
The first track is a 6/10 for me. There is little to no variation in the track, but the quality of the instruments is quite nice actually.

The second track is your best. 8/10. Still not seeing very much variance, and the tracks are short. I’d recommend really finding things that compliment the music you are writing.

The third is… strange. It’s like an experimental drum track… But, I do like the guitar / sitar thing going on. I get like a lo-fi hiphop vibe which is pretty cool. Again, I wish it was a bit longer and more eventful. 6/10

But, great work! Hopefully this helps you. :smiley:

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#3

Thank you, for the feedback ya I wanted it to be longer but I just felt like it would get boring and I wanted to do some much more with it but I just thought it would way to much.

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#4

Understandable. I feel the same way when composing my music! Though a normal track is usually 2/3 minutes long, it’s really not that long when you think about it. But you should really keep doing the second style! It really sounded nice. :slight_smile:

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#5

Also, I had 4 links up there not 3 :rofl: The another link got mixed in with the another one mind telling me the name of the one you want me to keep doing?

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#6

Oh :laughing: The “Intro 3” was super good.
The Third link. :slight_smile:

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#7

Looking Up In The Stars: 6 / 10

  • It was simple, but it was clean in the sense that it was produced well, and the flow was good.

Night Time: 5.7 / 10

  • The instruments and sounds individually were good, but they didn’t compliment each other very well.

Intro : 3: 6.6 / 10

  • This scored higher due to not having the issue that Night Time had: The instruments complimented each other very well, and it was smooth.

Depp Sea Finder: 8.1 / 10

  • This was my favorite as I enjoyed this one VERY much. I really liked the transition from how it seemed there would be a beat drop, but then the song’s tempo slowed back down, and introduced another beat. Very nice.

Now each song to me would have easily gotten 1 - 2 more points if they were either:

  • Longer
  • Did not seem like they looped as much (Mainly Looking Up in the Stars and Night Time)
  • The beats progressed faster, or the main portion of the song was hit earlier since the tracks were so short.

Overall, I think this was good work, especially for someone who started at 15!

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#8

These tracks are really good in terms of melodies, I get a great sense/vibe that these could be used for games, keep up the good work!

#9

Hello. My name is Snowflake. Your topic seems interesting but you should not be asking others to rate your assets out of ten according to DevForum moderators. Hope this helps.