Hello, this is my first GFX made entirely with ROBLOX studio and paint.
Feedback is appreciated.
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I would add a bit more light at least in the background so you can see. It’s pretty good for your first keep it up.
Yes it looks better. What’s going on with the character’s right arm lol?
Oh i had to make it that way to make it look like hes holding the gun.
But you can’t really tell. You could add a burst of light coming out of the gun.
Good Idea, let me see what i can do with that!
If you’re wanting to get higher detailed and more appealing GFX’s, I would highly recommend learning how to create them in blender! For being in ROBLOX studio and paint, this is quite nice tho.
Add more lighting and detail so it’s more attention grabbing
Im not very good with blender, and cannot watch yt videos to see how to make it with this, thanks for the feedback though!
Pretty good for a beginner, but there is A TON of room for improvement.
First of all, the render is way, way, too dark. You literally cannot see anything besides the skin of the SCP guard. Please add lighting so your viewers don’t have to squint.
Second, you did not use a rig. GFX is not just posing characters, rather, it’s a combination of the lighting, text, pose, etc in one image. I have attached an easy-to-use R15 Roblox rig for your convenience below 
Third, the text is a bit weird. Why is it crossed out?
Overall, it’s fine for your first. You can learn a lot from past mistakes, don’t quit, and keep going for it 
PaintRigV3.blend - Google Drive (here’s the rig)
It’s OK as a first gfx without the use of any program to improve the look. It’s far too gloomy, and it could use a little PaZaz! 
the text is crossed out because i thought it was cool, Im currently learning the things you suggested. Thanks.
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Thanks, i agree, it could use that. I made it a bit too dark.
Alright, good luck. You can do it!
he looks like he is not apart of the background, Like cropped in.
yea i noticed this. its not a blender gfx, its literally a roblox dummy in front of a part with a decal on it.
lol, you should make it like a box and find floor textures, wall textures and more by searching them up on the toolbox.
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I probably could have used an actual build instead of a decal. Good Idea.