If you’re wanting to get higher detailed and more appealing GFX’s, I would highly recommend learning how to create them in blender! For being in ROBLOX studio and paint, this is quite nice tho.
Add more lighting and detail so it’s more attention grabbing
Im not very good with blender, and cannot watch yt videos to see how to make it with this, thanks for the feedback though!
Pretty good for a beginner, but there is A TON of room for improvement.
First of all, the render is way, way, too dark. You literally cannot see anything besides the skin of the SCP guard. Please add lighting so your viewers don’t have to squint.
Second, you did not use a rig. GFX is not just posing characters, rather, it’s a combination of the lighting, text, pose, etc in one image. I have attached an easy-to-use R15 Roblox rig for your convenience below 
Third, the text is a bit weird. Why is it crossed out?
Overall, it’s fine for your first. You can learn a lot from past mistakes, don’t quit, and keep going for it 
PaintRigV3.blend - Google Drive (here’s the rig)
It’s OK as a first gfx without the use of any program to improve the look. It’s far too gloomy, and it could use a little PaZaz! 
the text is crossed out because i thought it was cool, Im currently learning the things you suggested. Thanks.
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Thanks, i agree, it could use that. I made it a bit too dark.
Alright, good luck. You can do it!
he looks like he is not apart of the background, Like cropped in.
yea i noticed this. its not a blender gfx, its literally a roblox dummy in front of a part with a decal on it.
lol, you should make it like a box and find floor textures, wall textures and more by searching them up on the toolbox.
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I probably could have used an actual build instead of a decal. Good Idea.
I’m not gonna say anything too much, you know the answers yourself, just compare it to all the rest.
just what i was going to say looks much better
you helped me alot with my ui so ill give you some feedback for this
- the text font isnt my favorite
- the gunflare looks a little wierd but thats just my opinion
- maybe add a hidden scp to the backround hidden things are always cool
- you could add a shadow over the soldier so it looks like hes looking up at something or hes shooting at it
- LEARN BLENDER its totally worth it blender is great for making models and redering them i perssonally only have around a year of experience in blender and i dont do much rendering but still its very usefull\
Great for a first gfx though! you should have seen mine
Aww how come? I can recommend a few nice starter tutorials if needed, and some more that will help you once you’ve developed a better understanding of how the software works?
Please do if you can! Specifically devforum ones if that’s possible because i cant really go on Any other social platform except roblox related things.
Ohh right, thats understood! I’ll try to find some resources on the devforums for you as soon as I’m free.
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Thanks so much, i highly appreciate your help.
ill make a tutorial later today for you becouse i have school right now